You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss. In your letter: Describe the job you are applying for Say what you want included in the reference letter *Request that you former boss send you the letter be the end of the week

#job #reference #boss #*describe #*say #*request #week

Dear Sir, I am Jatin Kumar, a

formor

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former

employee of your organization,

worked

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working

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in IT department. I am writing

this

letter

for requesting you to issue a reference

letter

for me.

week, I am going to apply for a

job

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MNC and one of the requirements for applying is to attach a reference

letter

from your

last

employer.

This

job

is a senior system engineer

job

, which will be responsible for all the website development and system

upgradation

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up gradation

up-gradation

, it will

also

include the training for other junior employees. Can you please issue me a reference

letter

for the same

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Please include all the project details whom I worked on, with duration and technology used in each project.

Also

please mention my joining date and my

last

job

title with the company. As I mention, I am applying

week for

this

new

job

and I need

this

letter

to send it with my other details. Can you please send it to me latest by the end of

this

week? I already shared my address and cell number with the HR department. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatin Kumar

Submitted by test on Tue Jul 28 2020

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

194 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss. In your letter: *Describe the job you are applying for *Say what you want included in the reference letter *Request that you former boss send you the letter be the end of the week

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attraction. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

topics: We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree

Nowadays, in many countries young people do not communicate with older people as much as they used to. Why is this happening? How could this situation be improved?

Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss. In your letter: Describe the job you are applying for Say what you want included in the reference letter *Request that you former boss send you the letter be the end of the week