Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the
last
half-century human Linking Words
lifestyle
is changing. Today we are living in stress and high pace of life. Use synonyms
Consequently
, it has negative impacts on public Linking Words
health
. Because of changes in living conditions, the number of diseases Use synonyms
such
as diabetes, heart attack, stroke and high blood pressure has increased dramatically. Linking Words
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some people say that the best way to improve public Suggestion
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health
is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Undoubtedly, sports facilities are very important for Use synonyms
health
. If you exercise regularly, you will not have any disease than others who do not exercise at all. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, sports facilities are not the only solution to improve public Linking Words
health
. I think there are many other measures which directly affect the public Use synonyms
health
. Use synonyms
For instance
, working conditions, medical facilities, balance diet, air and water pollution, Linking Words
lifestyle
and Use synonyms
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food. Suggestion
healthy
Furthermore
, in our country we can see that gyms are not popular. Linking Words
Therefore
, we can improve public Linking Words
health
by changing work conditions and rising wages, having a high income Use synonyms
people
can afford Suggestion
person
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health
food. Suggestion
healthy
Health
food exactly is the most important for immunity boost. We should pay more attention Use synonyms
for
Suggestion
to
environment
, reducing water and air pollution. The government should increase the budget for research in healthcare sector, Suggestion
the environment
also
provide all people with medicine. No less important balance diet and Linking Words
lifestyle
, everybody should understand that balanced diet and Use synonyms
lifestyle
is important for supporting organism Use synonyms
health
. To sum up, certainly, I can say building new hospitals Use synonyms
is
more important than sport facilities.Suggestion
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