Would you like to live a long, calm life until 100 years old or would you prefer a shorter life but much more intense. Decide and explain your reasons.

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our lives is up to our personalities, and hobbies. And that will split it into two parts, a calm and long

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, or a short and intense

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of them have their advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes you can round-the-clock tranquil,

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, you might have terminal intensity in your

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. From a positive point-of-view, living a calm

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will ensure you a massive number of advantages,

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, You will be happy, living a calm

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is the dream of everybody, even multi-billionaires and millionaires

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and living it is not that easy unless you have succeeded in achieving

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, you will be able to live the

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you want, and never experience stress again.

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, the old can look after the children of a family. Most of the adults in society are experiencing enormous stress and pressure. They do not have spare time to take care of their children. So, the old could assist them to care for their children.

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, my cousin was brought up by my grandfather and grandmother since my uncle and aunt were both very busy in their work and they hardly had time to take care of my cousin. Seeking help from their parents helps them to save the money for employing another babysitter and it

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improved the relationship between family members.

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, Everyone will be

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, longevity can bring you a lot of money, especially if you started to give online classes to others for money, and you can give everyone your experience in living longer.

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Although

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may be true, we have some disadvantages to longevity, that will cause some negative impacts,

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, A long

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can feel tedious sometimes, you can live with some pain, and that pain can lead you to death, it can be from bankrupting, broken relationships, or bad children. Eventually, the ageing problem, The U.N. Population Division projects that people older than age 60 will increase from just less than 800 million in 2011 (11 per cent of the world population) to more than 2 billion in 2050 (22 per cent). In essence, living a calm and long

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is a way to live the

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you dreamt of, as a matter of fact, it can

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help you to achieve many goals in

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you have always wanted to achieve.

Submitted by Al-baraa Mahmoud Alqurneh on Tue Jul 28 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

387 words

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Would you like to live a long, calm life until 100 years old or would you prefer a shorter life but much more intense. Decide and explain your reasons.

Fully explain your ideas

It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

Internet development has great impact on people’s life. Some people say social media do more harm to the youth. Other people sat they do the great to the youth, Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

More and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave ovens and rice cookers. Is it positive or negative?

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?