Would you like to live a long, calm life until 100 years old or would you prefer a shorter life but much more intense. Decide and explain your reasons.

living
Suggestion
Living
our lives is up to our personalities, and hobbies. And that will split it into two parts, a calm and long
life
, or a short and intense
life
.
both
Suggestion
Both
of them have their advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes you can round-the-clock tranquil,
on the other hand
, you might have terminal intensity in your
life
. From a positive point-of-view, living a calm
life
will ensure you a massive number of advantages,
First
, You will be happy, living a calm
life
is the dream of everybody, even multi-billionaires and millionaires
,
Accept space
,
and living it is not that easy unless you have succeeded in achieving
this
, you will be able to live the
life
you want, and never experience stress again.
Second
, the old can look after the children of a family. Most of the adults in society are experiencing enormous stress and pressure. They do not have spare time to take care of their children. So, the old could assist them to care for their children.
For example
, my cousin was brought up by my grandfather and grandmother since my uncle and aunt were both very busy in their work and they hardly had time to take care of my cousin. Seeking help from their parents helps them to save the money for employing another babysitter and it
also
improved the relationship between family members.
Subsequently
, Everyone will be
stound
filled with the emotional impact of overwhelming surprise or shock
stunned
stoned
stunted
, longevity can bring you a lot of money, especially if you started to give online classes to others for money, and you can give everyone your experience in living longer.
although
Suggestion
Although
this
may be true, we have some disadvantages to longevity, that will cause some negative impacts,
First
, A long
life
can feel tedious sometimes, you can live with some pain, and that pain can lead you to death, it can be from bankrupting, broken relationships, or bad children. Eventually, the ageing problem, The U.N. Population Division projects that people older than age 60 will increase from just less than 800 million in 2011 (11 per cent of the world population) to more than 2 billion in 2050 (22 per cent). In essence, living a calm and long
life
is a way to live the
life
you dreamt of, as a matter of fact, it can
also
help you to achieve many goals in
life
you have always wanted to achieve.
Submitted by Al-baraa Mahmoud Alqurneh on

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