You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter ad follows:
Dear Rahul,
I hope you and your family doing well. I received your letter, thanks for consulting me before taking
this
important decision of your life either you should work or study.
I can recollect that you told me about your ambitions and career plans. I don't think you will enjoy your college as your ambition is totally opposite to a college student. Linking Words
Also
, a Linking Words
job
will expose you Use synonyms
the
real corporate world and you can learn what you always wanted to.
I Change preposition
to the
rememebr
when I passed my graduation and choose Correct your spelling
remember
Master's
above Correct article usage
the Master's
job
. Believe me, I regret my decision till now and won't like you to do the same mistake. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
market
is growing and in Add an article
the market
Linking Words
next
2-3 Correct article usage
the next
year
you will see more growth Fix the agreement mistake
years
into
Change preposition
in
this
.
I would really Linking Words
happy
if you choose Add a missing verb
be happy
Use synonyms
job
in software engineering. I know you are very good Add an article
a job
the job
in
coding and designing Change preposition
at
website
. Fix the agreement mistake
websites
This
type of Linking Words
job
will give you the opportunity to learn the new market trends and latest technologies, which will give you an extra edge in your growth.
I am coming to Delhi Use synonyms
next
month, Linking Words
lets
plan to Replace the word
let's
let us
met
at that time. Contact me if you need anything.
Cheers, JatinChange the verb
meet
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite