A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job

Dear John, I received your letter a couple of days back and felt really bad after knowing that your
country
is going through recession due to
war like
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situation with your
neighboring
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country
. Your request to find a
job
in my
country
was a good choice
,
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because a lot of companies in my
country
are looking for MBA with
engineering
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an engineering
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background in Computer Science. I started looking for
job
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opportunity since I received your letter, and fortunately I found a
job
best suited
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your experience and qualification. The
job
requires a candidate with over 11 years of experience in
software
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programming domain plus
a
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MBA degree in
the
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Marketing and Sales. So,
this
job
exactly matches your
skill set
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. I would like you to apply for
this
opportunity by sending your resume to [email protected]. I am very confident that with your achievement and knowledge, you will be the right choice for the organization. Best wishes Elon Musk
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation
  • industry
  • duties and responsibilities
  • typical day
  • skills and experiences
  • job requirements
  • company culture
  • personality
  • work ethic
  • application process
  • job listing
  • submit an application
  • documents required
  • tailored resume
  • cover letter
  • relevant experiences
  • reviewing documents
  • practicing for interviews
  • promptly
  • deadlines
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