You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Shelly, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am going to come to Canada. I am so excited and eagerly waiting to meet you, and I would appreciate your help in the following matter. Fortunately, I got

visas

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yesterday and I will study

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Therapy course

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Confederation College from September

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2020.

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, I would like to have a part-time job as I heard that an international student has to pay higher fees;

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, I believe it would be so hard if I would not have any job to overcome my expenses of accommodation and mobile bills, grocery bills and other expenditures. Not only does

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of living

make

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me worried, but

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I would like to gain experience

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a foreign setting. If you can give your reference and suggest my name it would be so easy to get an interview, since you are a citizen of Canada, it will leave your impact.

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, if you advise me which websites I can use to apply and register, I would like to start that process ahead of time. I'd be so grateful. Yours Lovingly, Sarah