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Computers have become so advanced and interactive that student in the future will have no need for a human educator in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree? Why not?

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Owing to the advancement in computers are getting more popular from
last two decade
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the last two decades
last two decades
. It is undoubted that any sector of society doesn’t find the necessity of the computers. It
also
 seems that the education sector is one of them. Some people believe that due to improvement in technology of computers, there is no need of teachers to educate children.
However
, other people argue opposite to it. In my opinion, computers cannot take place
of
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in
 a human’s brain so I believe that learn teachers are necessary in the classroom to educate students. There are innumerous advantages of computers. Computers can give enormous types of information, solve any difficult calculation in no fraction of seconds. Despite of having
such
 advantages, how to use the computer related programs can be learned from teachers only. The computers can give methodology and solutions. The faculty knows the understanding level of student and with respect to that they teach student using different methods. Some students
also
 excel in the study by appreciation from educators. It is very obvious that human to human interaction is stronger than human to machine. Teachers can use the computers to make the learning process interesting as per example, with PowerPoint presentation they can explain any difficult topic to student by using animation and colourful presentation. Teachers might have changed their conventional way of teaching in order to use the latest methods using computers. In conclusion, I opine that computer is a useful machine for education, but it can not be substitute of the teachers. The teacher plays vital role in the child's learning process. And so, by learning from teachers should continue in future.
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