In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience.
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opinion it
has both Accept comma addition
opinion, it
positve
and characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
nagative
effects either for characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
shoping
or as an entertainment, searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
also
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. The Suggestion
a shopping mall
shopping malls
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both to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
postive
and negative effects of the statement from the bird's eye view up to arriving a concrete answer.
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positive
jubilent
joyful and proud especially because of triumph or success
jubilant
activites
. any specific behavior
activities
shopping
malls are Suggestion
Shopping
act
as Suggestion
acting
stress buster
for stressed inhabitants because malls are giving an Suggestion
a stress buster
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so
, they would feel an to a very great extent or degree
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anxity
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anxiety
manged
spectacular for shopping be successful; achieve a goal
managed
purpose
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purpose, consequently
consequently
people could enjoy an atmosphere as well as shopping a
particular things. expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
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has been giving
Suggestion
have been given
have been giving
were given
opportunites
for spending leisure a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
activites
any specific behavior
activities
such
as the scary house, the play ground
an area where many people go for recreation
playground
,
the dance bar, so individuals can spend more time as well as shopping.
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,
obnixious
by inhabitants for an entertainment as well as shopping needy things. causing disapproval or protest
obnoxious
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need
maintance
and their bills are paid after activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
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shopping
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shopping, although
although
people would like to do an enjoyment
as well as shopping.
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enjoyable
shopping
malls Suggestion
Shopping
needs
an excessive employment to Suggestion
need
provides
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provide
facilites
so owners have pressure a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
attrects
the direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
attracts
attract
counsumer
. a person who uses goods or services
consumer
Nevertheless
,
people do an excessive shopping as well as needy shopping daily Accept space
,
neccesities
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necessities
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result people
get enjoy Accept comma addition
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choises
.
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would
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get benif
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