Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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These days to make assignments more fun schools have allowed students to work in teams. While some pupil
are
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is
willing to work together, some still seek to work individually.
Hence
, It is no surprise that working in a
group
or alone can have their own perks.
Butaccording
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But according
to me, working in a
group
can yield more
effecient
being effective without wasting time or effort or expense
efficient
and faster outputs. It is known that, doing any kind of job needs good amount of patience and efforts, with the right person guiding a
group
of kids these qualities can be utilized judicially. Doing projects with
eachother
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each other
can lead to results
such
as, delivery on time,
vibrant reflection
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a vibrant reflection
of thoughts and better solutions.
In addition
to
this
, performing together can be
theraputic
tending to cure or restore to health
therapeutic
, and students get to develop socially.
thus
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Thus
, working with
eachother
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each other
can be
benificial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
.
However
, doing the same task alone can have its
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
too. It is a known fact that sometimes even with proper guidance not
every one
all people
everyone
participates.
This
leads to the decrease of the quality of
end product
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the end product
. Another
such
reasons
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reason
can be,
disorganization
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the disorganization
that can cause clashing of too many thoughts while doing a task. These can lead to a lot of chaos.
Hence
, performing a project alone can seem
fesible
capable of being done with means at hand and circumstances as they are
feasible
. In my opinion, creativity is better when pupil come along, share their ideas and built
somthing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
with
eachother's
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each other's
help.
This
not only give them understanding of
other's perspective
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the other's perspective
, but
also
teaches them to respect other's opinion, making them more flexible in the actual world. In conclusion, performing with a
group
of people can be as yielding as doing the thing alone given the right amount of efforts and
effeciency
the ratio of the output to the input of any system
efficiency
efficiencies
, but according to me performing in a
group
can be faster and
effective
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more effective
. But it depends on person to person on what to choose.
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