Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Today several

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Today, several

schools create a competitive environment with the help of applying competitions and quizzes. While some argue that it has positive effects on children, others believe

instead

of

this

method, team working skills should be taught and I

also

agree with the

second

view. On the one side, in most cases, a student puts full effort if there is any prize at the end which is the main point of

competition

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the competition

. To achieve the feat, they study regularly and work hard which have positive effects on education. Accomplishing

goals makes

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goals, make

goals make

pupil not only honoured student, but

also

he enjoys leading a class.

Moreover

, competitiveness teaches children leadership skills which are very helpful in their career path.

For example

, as a labour market is so competitive, participants who are familiar with

such

a situation in the school years know which actions are needed in these cases. On the other side, there is a myriad of activities

that is

not dependent on a man and demands team spirit. Obviously, the effectiveness of

coworking

the act of preparing something (as food) by the application of heat

cooking

is noticeable almost in all

scale

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scales

and it is preferable in terms of time-consuming and generating good ideas which increase effectiveness and efficiency. Especially, big companies like Google and Microsoft are willing to involve different teams for not specific projects, but

also

daily tasks.

Moreover

, acquiring new skills and knowledge is more

accessible while

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accessible, while

working in a team, because they share thoughts and for being much more productive teammates

also

help to overcome challenges which require novel ability. To conclude, considering

both sides of creating

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both sides, creating

both sides creating

a competitive and non-competitive learning environment, it is

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deserving of the highest esteem or admiration

admirable

that their impacts on children finish obtaining new skills. From my point of view, in modern society, people need soft skills much which is taught at school.