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Its is becoming increasing popular fo students tio take a year gap between finishing school and going to university. some people believe it is a waste while some feel it is necessary. give you view.

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It is very often seen that students have to make a decision about whether they want to continue their education as soon as
thy
people in general
they
 finish
schooling
Suggestion
school
 or if they want to take
a year gap
Suggestion
a gap year
. Some people feel its
better
Suggestion
best
 to take a break while some feel they should
study
 non stop. In
this
 essay, I will be discussing the benefits of taking a year off between finishing school and going to university. Taking the right decision is very important when it comes to making a career in the future. Sometimes,
taking going
Accept comma addition
taking, going
 to university soon after finishing school may result in students choosing the wrong field of
study
. It is crucial for students to have knowledge of what they want to pursue in say 5 years time. Many a time students know exactly what they want to do and
hence
 take up going to university.
On the other hand
, taking a gap year is beneficial as it allows the student to explore the various options that they can
study
.
they
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They
 can
also
 do internships to see what kind of job they like doing most and
then
accordingly
 decide what they want to
further
study
. They not only get hands-on experience but
also
 get to know their likes and dislikes.
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