Some people believe that we have too many choices.

According to some
people the modern
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people in the modern
life provides us with an overwhelming
options
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option
. Nowadays information is spread out over the world rapidly and bring people a huge number of choices. I completely agree with
this
and I believe that the Internet and
glabalization
growth to a global or worldwide scale
globalization
are two major factors involved
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First
of all it is the fact that the
invrntion
the creation of something in the mind
invention
of
internet
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the internet
has provided undeniable advantages for human life
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But people nowadays will be lost in
choices
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the choices
and
can not
can not
cannot
choose the most suitable option for themselves.For
examplein
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example, in
example in
the
past there
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past, there
were only two or three newspapers for kids in a week. They read it unless it was not interesting.
In contrast
today children can easily get access to the world web and read anything they want.
Neverthelles they
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Nevertheless, they
Nevertheless they
are not using from internet truly
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Secondly
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there were
varius
of many different kinds purposefully arranged but lacking any uniformity
various
problems with tv.Many years ago
,
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,
there were not a lot of channels
,
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,
children saw only one or two channels and
certes
a heavy open wagon usually having two wheels and drawn by an animal
carts
certs
charts
they did not know what was it
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So they
developped
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
slowly
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Because they did not know
the law of themselves
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the law themselves
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Moreover they
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Moreover, they
had not enough food to eat, but now we have everything to eat and purchase.Many factories are producing products and delivering
this
to our home
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As a
result we
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result, we
can choose anything we want and compare it with other one's. So
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we must think the situation of in the past and use from other choices
reasonable
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reasonably
. In
conclusion i
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conclusion, I
conclusion I
believe that since we have too many options today we have to be careful before taking a decision and end up wasting time for choosing little thing while we still have more important thing to do in our life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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