In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.

It is commonly believed that making enormous

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by

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with

a small group of populations in a country is beneficial to the community, whereas some critics think that a

salary

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ceiling should be established in order to prevent

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situation.

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essay agrees that people should have right and freedom to earn the salaries they deserve and the poverty ought to strive for a higher

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instead

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of relying on the rich.

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of all, it could be unfair if a person has the ability to earn a huge

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, but the governments prohibit

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these possibilities

this possibility

. To achieve

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a great success and prosperity, the person must have been working very hard and sacrificing most of his or her entertainment activities and rest.

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, no one has the right to restrict them from acquiring the returns they deserved.

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, the affluent are valuable to a society because they

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pay higher

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tax, which can financially fund the government for building more

infrastructures or

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infrastructures, or

providing better quality health care system

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for

the community to enjoy.

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, limiting the

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of the rich is believed to allow a more balanced wealth allocation in the society, and

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narrowing the gap between the poverty and the rich. An economic collapse can be resulted if the poor, which are

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the majority of

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the populations

of a country, cannot earn a moderate

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in order to sustain their daily lives. Some countries,

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the U.S., do not set any laws to regulate the

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of celebrities or sport stars, have

huge gap

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a huge gap

huge gaps

between the rich and the poor, and those citizens who only earn the minimal wages are suffering from sickness and discriminations from the affluent.

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, the aid from the government is not actually helping those populations as long as they are not trying their best to improve the situations. In conclusion, even some people are earning unreasonably high salaries, the governments should not restrict them because they have the freedom to earn it. Limiting the

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level looks

more fair

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fairer

to both parties in the

community but

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community, but

in reality it cannot provide any actual help because people

maybe

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may be

reluctant to work afterwards.