You are a teacher at a secondary school (high school). You have been asked to arrange a visit to a local museum or tourist attraction for some of your students. Write a letter to the manager of the museum or tourist attraction. In your letter you should: say who you are and which school you teach at? say why the school would like the students to visit the museum/attraction? ask about educational facilities or information that the museum/attraction can provide?
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
you
from Willington High School in Hood Street, merely near Change preposition
to you
to
your area, and would like to ask Change preposition
apply
some
information about your museum.
I am Change preposition
for some
the
teacher of Arts and my own specific major is painting. We have almost 200 Correct article usage
a
students
which
within a poll 40 of them confirmed their interest to start painting as a course.
As far as I checked through websites, you have a huge Correct word choice
and
collections
of different paintings that can be quite fascinating for our mentioned art Correct the article-noun agreement
collection
students
to view, therefore
it will be appreciated if you let me know wether
you have a one-day educational tour for Correct your spelling
whether
such
pupils who can learn about the history and different methods of painting while
they are enjoying visiting the museum as well. Also
if you can clarify about
the special payment rates for Change preposition
apply
students
especially when they are coming in groups of around 40, that would be quite delightful.
I will be extremely grateful if you were
interested Wrong verb form
are
to answer
my letter in Change preposition
in answering
couple
of days, and Change the article
a couple
accordingly
our Add a comma
accordingly,
students
can embark their
artistic tour as soon as possible.
I look forward Change preposition
on their
for
your prompt reply
Yours faithfully
Abraham StreeterChange preposition
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and purpose, though your letter is generally well organized.
task achievement
To enhance task response, you might consider adding specific questions about the educational facilities or specifics of the painting collections the museum offers.
tone
A polite and formal tone suitable for the purpose of the letter.
structure
Good structure and organization with clear paragraphs.
closing
Effective closing that anticipates a prompt response, reinforcing the purpose of the letter.