The most common solution for criminal behaviour is prison but many believe education is a better method. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many are of the opinion that taxpayers are fulfilling their obligations to
society
at large while other feel that
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
extends beyond a financial contribution to the government. In my opinion, paying taxes greatly helps fund social
programs but
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programs, but
individuals have little choice but to do more if they
also
want to think highly of themselves. The main reason that many see taxes as enough are the far reaching impact of tax dollars. Take some well-run European socialist countries
such
as France
for example
. In France, there are social welfare programs underpinning their progressive
society
such
maternity leave for new mothers, world renowned unemployment benefits, top notch schools, not to mention more basic services like police, fire, and infrastructure
maintanence
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
. These are the direct result of taxes and though their net effect varies by implementation in various countries, they are clearly the foundation of stable societies globally. Despite the discernible impact of taxes, individuals are responsible for their daily decisions related to
society
. Every job will touch on, with varying degrees of strength,
society
. A doctor who takes his job seriously, rather than simply trying to push new drugs or unnecessary tests to drive up premiums, helps families in their most dire situations. Even a cashier has a role to play. They can do their job responsibly with a positive attitude and send out other people
into
Suggestion
in
society
with a good impression or contribute to the rising tide of
cynisism
a cynical feeling of distrust
cynicism
in today’s culture. These actions are unavoidable and anyone who feels the need to think of themselves as a good person has no choice but to take up a larger role in making
society
a better place to live. In conclusion, thought taxes
are
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were
part of what a person owes to
society
, they will necessarily
also
have a positive or negative day to day impact. People should rightly see their contributions as essentially self-interested excuses to feel good about themselves.
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