Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others feel that those who have retired should pay to support themselves. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, ways of caring about people, who had retired,

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are

controversial issue

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a controversial issue

controversial issued

controversial issues

. While, some people think that they should receive monetary endorsement, given by country’s authority, others are claiming that pensioners must perform a payment for maintaining themselves. In my point of view,

government

should help only people, who

are acquiring

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is acquiring

extremely low pension and do not have any relatives or family. Because, those people have not anyone to aid them, and they are not able to sustain themselves by

money

. There

are

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is

considerable

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a considerable amount

amount

of people, convincing that

government

should assist people, who stop working because of their age, by ensuring a finance. They think so, because, elderly people

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have

many

troubles according

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troubles, according

to their health, that could be easily damaged in result of long term working and consumption of unhealthy groceries.

Consequently

, these people require huge

amount

of medicines, and medical aids that

does not cost

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do not cost

cheap.

For instance

, despite my grandparents’ pensions’

amount

is same with their salary, they always need extra

money

. So, these people believe that pensioners must be funded, because they deserve it by their years of hard work.

Although

, in every society there is opposite opinion, that think mature people should support themselves without obtaining exceed

money

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.

Because, their

amount

of acquired

money

remain

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remains

as they used to.

Moreover

, most of pensioners have children, who are capable of helping them. To illustrate, my grandparents can live without

government

’s help, because, we always care about them. Because of

this

, these people are claiming that retired people do not need

government

maintenance. Personally, I think

authority

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authorities

the authority

should fund

special group

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a special group

of people

,

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,

receiving very little

money

and do not have

family

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a family

. Because, compared to others, they really cannot afford themselves anything,

furthermore

, there is no one to help them.

Consequently

, they will suffer a starvation or disease. So, I think they are the people, who really demand

government

assistance. To conclude,

this

essay discussed peoples’ views about aid for pensioners.

However

, I believe that