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Many parents today employ private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, a large number of parents
hires
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hire
are hiring
 private tutors to educate their children after school
timing
a cooperative unit (especially in sports)
teaming
. It is a positive development for children by which they can new alternatives and it is
chance
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a chance
 to fill gap between weak and strong students.
To begin
 with, as we know that there can be different ways to solve a question and
in
Suggestion
at
 school, there is a very short
time
 so we cannot learn all methods.
For instance
, if a student did not understand
lecture
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lectures
 in
classroom
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the classroom
classrooms
, now, he had a chance that he can ask from his tutor and understand the problem with another method.
Secondly
, it is a fact that every pupil is not intelligent, some of them take
time
 to understand the problem. So, private tuition is the best way to fill the gap between both types of students.
For instance
, intelligent student
take
Suggestion
takes
 less
time
 to understand.
On the other hand
, weak student needs little more
time
 and concentration of the teacher. So, an extra hour and more concentration from the tutor helps them to compete with the other students. To conclude, I support the idea of private tutoring because it is the best way for a
children
Suggestion
child
 to learn the new ideas and
this
 era of competition, private tuition make weak students more dedicated
toward
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to
 study and compete with others.
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