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Nowadays more and more people choose living separately from their families. What are its causes and consequences?

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What is a family and why do we need it? Once upon a time, long ago, people needed a family to survive. They couldn't go hunting on their own or be safe without any help. A person needed the person. But times change as well as family relations. There is a world of possibilities and variety now. Everyone wants to use every gift of the world and there is no necessity to share it with another one. We can eat, work and relax and still be safe and sound. A family is a pleasure, not a requirement these days. The people know it and the people use it. Everybody wants a freedom and independence and gets them when leaves their family and lives on their own.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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