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Nowadays more and more people choose living separately from their families. What are its causes and consequences?

#people #families #consequences
Today more
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Today, more
 and more young people tend to start living by themselves at the early age. While it's hard to suggest universal reasons of
this
 phenomenon, I would like to introduce some ideas that are worth mentioning.
First
 of all, some kids have to move to another city just simple to start studying in a college or a university.
Secondly
, separating from mom and dad is a great chance to learn how to do regular
staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
such
 as household chores, buying groceries or paying for bills.
Such
small simple
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small, simple
 things help to build up character and become independent. Thereby it is an essential feature of personality to survive
on
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in
modern world
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the modern world
a modern world
. When it comes to the consequences of
such
 fact, by my side, there are not any detrimental drawbacks of it. If a person starts to live by his or her own he or she starts to earn money as soon as possible to able to afford things
such
 as travelling or expensive gadgets. In my opinion, it's useful even for parents because they are
financial
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financially
 free in that case.
Furthermore
, a man becomes more independent and mature if he or she lives alone.
For example
, some of my classmates moves to study
to
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in
 Moscow and left their parents at the age of 18. These days I see
dramatic difference
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dramatic differences
the dramatic difference
a dramatic difference
 between them and my other classmates. Those who left their parents have
much wider background
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a much wider background
, are able to make their own decisions and take responsibility. Summing up, there are more and more factors
today why
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today, why
 teenagers try to live separately.
Although
 it's much harder and more complicated not to depend on your family there are many distinct advantages
such
 as freedom (even financial),
opportunity
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Opportunity
 to make self-determined decisions, being more open minded.
Submitted by Kateryna Krasnozhon on

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