Some people believe that it is to best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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different situations occur sometime there was a bad situation which people are not satisfied and feel disheartened from activity some people thought that can accept these situations and some people thought that doing for best. In my opinion, I agree to these people who thought that do try to improve and achieve better pa better
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are many disadvantages if someone accepts the unsatisfactory job.
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, will be disappointed from whole activity.
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they will not happy and
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their job as well as from his soul.
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, will never accept responsibility and do nothing. There
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which gave the best opportunity where human become happier and they
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and job so try anytime for the best one day you will achieve your goal. If someone tries to improve their bad situation and their success so they will be happy for whole
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. They will feel himself comfortable with doing their work with responsibility. In conclusion, it is not necessary that always in
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have bad situation occurs some time best opportunity
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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