You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came, it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery Explain the importance of this delivery ask for a replacement item to be sent

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Dear Madame, I am writing to report an incomplete delivery of

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kitchen equipment that I bought a few days ago on your

website

. On 26th July, I ordered a Toshiba Grinder from your

website

. Based on the description mentioned on the

website

, the grinder had three attachments, which included three different size containers along with their lids.

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, when I opened the packet

this

morning, I found the smallest size container and the lid of the largest size container missing.

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I have witnessed customers receiving great quality products and services from your reputed

website

, I am shocked

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this

deceptive action. The time and accuracy of the delivery

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extremely important for me as I have guests coming in tomorrow for whom I need to cook using

this

equipment. I am exceedingly displeased with the lack of attention to my urgent needs because I didn’t receive any response from customer service when I called them.

Instead

of receiving these attachments separately in the mail, I expect you to replace the entire item with a higher quality product or the same product with all parts included. If the issue isn’t resolved within two days, I will be forced to contact higher authorities and leave a bad review on your

website

. Looking forward to a positive response from you immediately Yours faithfully, John Balton

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