Advantages and disadvantages of having own business

One big enticement for
business
ownership is reaping
the bigger
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the biggest
financial rewards. Successful
business
owners have the opportunity to make more money for the risks they take. A tax
preparer
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Preparer
who
makesa bout
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makes about
$15 per hour knows the firm charges several hundred dollars for the service he provides. When
employee
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an employee
the employee
feels his value is worth more than the pay scale, opening his own
business
begins to make a lot of sense.
However
,
business
owners tend to experience high levels of stress as well as health issues. Not having
consistent paycheck
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a consistent paycheck
means
business
owners always need to generate new sales and revenues. Owners often experience significant variations in monthly income and have
potentially higher debt accumulation
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a potentially higher debt accumulation
. Bigger businesses that have a higher monthly overhead mean the
business
owner is responsible for others livelihood,
whic
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
also
adds to personal stress.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pivotal role
  • establishing
  • visibility
  • catering
  • preferences
  • trends
  • strategies
  • differentiation
  • competitive market
  • digital marketing
  • engaging
  • audience
  • customer loyalty
  • maintaining
  • long-term relationships
  • operational efficiency
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