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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Many people have different opinions about their study. Some students think that in individual lessons are better than study in
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group
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a group
groups
the group
, some students think that
group
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 lessons are better than one-on-one lesson. In my
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opinion, good
 sides of one-on-one lessons are selection of a certain pace and method of teaching, effective work and constant communication with the teacher, the opportunity to ask the teacher those questions that interest the student to a greater extent and the ability to express your opinion without fear and criticism.
Limitations
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The limitations
 are the cost of one hour of classes is slightly higher than that of a
group
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, in some cases, the student loses independence without a teacher, he is not able to
compete
come or bring to a finish or an end
complete
 tasks and in the future there may be difficulties with adaptation at study or work in
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group
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groups
a group
. The good sides of
group
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 lessons are the cost of classes in a
group
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 is two or three times cheaper than individual lessons, teamwork orientation in the future, teamwork helps to assimilate knowledge easier and better, a stick schedule of classes motivates not to miss classes and keep the general pace of learning and peer success is an incentive for other students.
Limitation
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The limitation
 is students who fall behind the
group
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 loss faith in themselves. After looking at everything I wrote, I think that
group
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 lessons are better than one-on-one lessons
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