More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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argued problem that the amount of people who have a thought

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newspapers

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newspaper

is not essential to print no longer is increasing. In my opinion, I disagree with

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idea.

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, there are a huge of reasons that we have to

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continue a certain state, condition, or activity

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the printing newspapers, but

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am merely telling

merely tell

am merely told

have merely told

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you two reasons.

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newspapers play an integral part of people's lives, especially in

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the older

generation. Because, it is a difficulty to elderly when they have to learn how to use

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a smartphone

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and find what is the real source of news.

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, newspapers provide the most reliable information about

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the news surrounding world

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aren't confused

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distortions

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the Internet.

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, reading

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newspapers is the pristine beauty of

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pearl

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people's

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for

many generations. Continuing printing

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newspapers means that people are acting as a catalyst to flourish and maintain

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traditional

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healthy

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, the government or people should encourage people to read newspapers by holding annually

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or book festival to

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for

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age

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the show on TV talk about newspapers with the heading a beautiful

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of people,

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, the

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newspaper

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should find

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newspaper

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the newspaper

a newspaper

to each house in every early morning, before the breakfast.

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, people can read

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newspaper

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a newspaper

with a cup of tea or cafe and

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healthy and comfortable breakfast before getting the stress of

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the day

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the morning

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make people's day. In conclusion,

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newspaper

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is still quintessential.

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, it need

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printing.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

printed paper newspapers
digital news platforms
tangible reading experience
replicated
disconnect from technology
focused
immersive
accessible
elderly
archival source
preserving historical events
local news coverage
advertising opportunities
small businesses
convenience
instant updates
valued
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