The diagrams below show the development of small fishing village its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.
The two maps depict alterations that took place in a small coastal village in Europe over the course of 30 years,
started
in 1974.
Wrong verb form
starting
Overall
, it can be seen that there are several major changes mainly involving the construction of hotels and road infrastructure.
As the village underwent major developments and Linking Words
resulting
in providing services to the tourists as its primary economic activity has stood in place of fishing, Wrong verb form
resulted
consequently
, Harbour disappeared and Linking Words
replaced
with a beach stretching from west to east. Another striking change is the expansion of the village with the establishment of Add a missing verb
was replaced
high-rise
Correct article usage
a high-rise
hotel
along the coastline on both sides of the rural area. Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
Subsequently
, offering sufficient Linking Words
resort
to visitors.
Fix the agreement mistake
resorts
Further
developments were the woodland removal to the west of the olive trees, Linking Words
farmland
which was replaced by a golf course. Correct word choice
and farmland
Additionally
, the main road has been laid to cope with the increased traffic Linking Words
to
the area and Change preposition
in
providing
easy access to other villages. It is interesting to note that fruits and vegetables required for hotels were supplied from extended farmland in 2004.Wrong verb form
provide
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