The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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These bar charts illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals which may be harmful to
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health if eaten too much. The three types of nutrients are
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
. The situations are
following
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. The first bar graph shows the average percentages of the
consumption
of
sodium
in the USA.
Dinner
contains the biggest proportion of
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sodium
consumption
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43%. Breakfast and snacks hold the same percentage of
sodium
consumed, with each of which are adding up to 14%. And when having lunch, 29% of
sodium
consumed
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. The
second
chart demonstrates the percentages of saturated fat in typical meals.
Similarly
,
dinner
contains the highest proportion of saturated fat consumed (37%). Lunch contributes to a
consumption
of 26% saturated fat, followed by snacks with 21% and breakfast with 16%. The
last
chart shows the figure
of
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added
sugar
. Snacks overtake the biggest proportion
from
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dinner
at 42%
in
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the
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added
sugar
consumption
.
Dinner
contains about 23% of the added
sugar
consumed
while
breakfast includes 16% and lunch contains 19%. In conclusion, the bar chart shows that every typical meal consumed in the USA contains a percentage of at least 14% of nutrients that can be unhealthy
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eaten
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too much.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, consumption, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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