The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
These bar charts illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals which may be harmful to
the
health if eaten too much. The three types of nutrients are Correct article usage
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sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
. The situations are following
.
The first bar graph shows the average percentages of the Correct article usage
the following
consumption
of sodium
in the USA. Dinner
contains the biggest proportion of the
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sodium
consumption
by
43%. Breakfast and snacks hold the same percentage of Change preposition
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sodium
consumed, with each of which are adding up to 14%. And when having lunch, 29% of sodium
consumed
. The Add a missing verb
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second
chart demonstrates the percentages of saturated fat in typical meals. Similarly
, dinner
contains the highest proportion of saturated fat consumed (37%). Lunch contributes to a consumption
of 26% saturated fat, followed by snacks with 21% and breakfast with 16%. The last
chart shows the figure of
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sugar
. Snacks overtake the biggest proportion from
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of
dinner
at 42% in
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the
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sugar
consumption
. Dinner
contains about 23% of the added sugar
consumed while
breakfast includes 16% and lunch contains 19%.
In conclusion, the bar chart shows that every typical meal consumed in the USA contains a percentage of at least 14% of nutrients that can be unhealthy it
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