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summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant

#information #feature #comparison
The bar charts give the information which
mention
Suggestion
mentions
 about international visitors to go to New Zealand
.
Accept space
.
 To be specific, the
first
 chart shows the reason why
their
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they're
 going. While the rest chart illustrates what transports
their
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they're
 used to during journey in
NewZealand
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New Zealand
 Overall, It is
obviously
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obvious
 that the most common
transport
 is
car
Suggestion
the car
. Whilst another
transport
 use to moving is public
transport
 which
include
Suggestion
includes
 plane, coach, train and boat. The bar chart
campares
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compares
 five
reason
Suggestion
reasons
 why
guest
and nothing more
just
 going to New Zealand by the percentage. The proportion of spending time for walking is 85%, ahead of reason for sightseeing time for walking is 75%. The figure for boating is 50
percent
, approximate with visiting volcanos by 3
percent
,
Accept space
,
6
percent
 for
vistiting
the activity of making visits
visiting
museum
Suggestion
the museum
 respectively. In
term
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terms
 of
transport
 people using, the percentage of
car
Suggestion
cars
 which reach a peak of 70
percent
. The proportion of other transports quite low which both plane and coach are over 30%. Following
this
,
train
Suggestion
a train
the train
 which
have
Suggestion
has
 percentage lower by 10%.
Finally
, Boat
using
Suggestion
is used
is using
uses
 to visit just under 5%
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