many people around the world believe that competition is important , while others say it has its drawbacks. Do you think the positives of the competition outweigh its negative ?
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competition
in the field of technology has helped our world
to experience new technologies in our day today
life. Suggestion
to day
Competition
has proven to be a boom to the world
in some ways.
At the same time, competition
has also
led to develop major conflicts globally. In a way to be powerfull
and to stand at the top position, almost all the nations around the having great power or force or potency or effect
powerful
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and its peoplke
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peacefull
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gets affected a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationships
severly
. to a severe or serious degree
severely
For example
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the USA
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although
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important, it
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