Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society, and other think young people should be free to behave as they will. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

When the topic of youth is discussed, there are dual opinions. Here
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some are of the viewpoint that youngsters should pursue their
culture
and traditions
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whereas
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a few others claim that they should be
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marked by lack of attention or consideration or forethought or thoroughness; not careful
careless
to traditions and act as an individual. Ahead
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of my
inclination both the views would be analysed
further
. Discussing the former view, they put several reasons for their claims. The prime one is that young adults can explore their art and
culture
in-depth.
For instance
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festivals, ancient paintings, languages, way of life
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food and customs can be
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inspected
thoroughly
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This
way they
not only carry
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don't only carry
forward their
traditons but
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traditions, but
traditions but
tradition but
also
expands it
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the reason being is the youth
are
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is
being
the strong
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the strongest
power in enlargement of any field
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Moreover
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many national
tradition
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traditions
and
culture
promote family and community harmony.
This
eventually eliminates the generation gap.If the youngsters assimilate their morals and ethics from their
ancestors
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ancestors, then
then
they can
inculate
have as a part, be made up out of
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in their predecessors. To add
this
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young generations are exposed to international T.V.
programmes
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Programmes
and foreign products so they are more likely to adopt other
culture
and forget their own roots.
In contrast
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argue
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argues
that individuality is the key-point.
This
promotes globalization. Every individual can be observed and judge equally.
For example
, one part of the Japan's
tradition
in respect to their jobs and
this
behaviour is taken by many people around the world.
Besides
this
, the young people are creative and imaginative minds.
This
allows them to create miracles. If they are not restricted by traditions and cultures
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then
they can go beyond their abilities
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Ultimately
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this
can encourage their professional development, enhance cognitive as well as intellectual skills. To sum up and offer my position
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I would
outrightly
bolster the former view than the latter, younger generations can learn about their art and
culture
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their family and community as well as morals and ethics rigorously from their
tradition
.I believe that
tradition
curbs the generation gap and there will be a lesser chance of complete vanish of cultural identity.
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