Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society, and other think young people should be free to behave as they will. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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When the topic of youth is discussed, there are dual opinions. Here
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some are of the viewpoint that youngsters should pursue their
culture
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and traditions
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whereas
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a few others claim that they should be
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marked by lack of attention or consideration or forethought or thoroughness; not careful
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to traditions and act as an individual. Ahead
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. Discussing the former view, they put several reasons for their claims. The prime one is that young adults can explore their art and
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in-depth.
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festivals, ancient paintings, languages, way of life
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food and customs can be
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inspected
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way they
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don't only carry
forward their
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traditions, but
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expands it
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the reason being is the youth
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is
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the strongest
power in enlargement of any field
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many national
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tradition
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traditions
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promote family and community harmony.
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eventually eliminates the generation gap.If the youngsters assimilate their morals and ethics from their
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ancestors, then
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they can
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in their predecessors. To add
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young generations are exposed to international T.V.
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Programmes
and foreign products so they are more likely to adopt other
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and forget their own roots.
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, the latter concept counter
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that individuality is the key-point.
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promotes globalization. Every individual can be observed and judge equally.
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, one part of the Japan's
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in respect to their jobs and
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behaviour is taken by many people around the world.
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, the young people are creative and imaginative minds.
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allows them to create miracles. If they are not restricted by traditions and cultures
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they can go beyond their abilities
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Ultimately
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can encourage their professional development, enhance cognitive as well as intellectual skills. To sum up and offer my position
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I would
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bolster the former view than the latter, younger generations can learn about their art and
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their family and community as well as morals and ethics rigorously from their
tradition
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.I believe that
tradition
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curbs the generation gap and there will be a lesser chance of complete vanish of cultural identity.
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