It was common in the past for people to retire at 60. Now more and more people are choosing to continue working past the official retirement age, with some countries even increasing the official age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree with this change? Why?

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is 60 years, while others has the opinion that the profession of an individual should be the criteria to choose the
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. In my opinion, for those who works in the industries which demanding a high level of physical and mental
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should be given early
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, and those who
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in a less physical challenge
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.T. Professionals, Clerical department, managerial levels could increase the
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of
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, the idea of standard
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for all professionals is certainly faulty.
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is because different jobs require different skills.
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, the countries like India people working in a police department, construction
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, the army are demanding to have high physical fitness, but since fitness levels decrease with
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, they should be given early
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.
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, In the world the health
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has been improved immensely so that the life expectancy of the people has been increased drastically.
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, in 20th century life expectancy of people was only 45 years in the world, which is now increased to 75 years. Due to
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some countries have increased their
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age
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law. So now people can
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more compared to a previous century.
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, most of the South Asian countries have increased the
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of
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law. In conclusion,
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the retirement age
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should select on the basis of
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, means the group who have more physical
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should retire earlier and vice versa. In my opinion, government should consider the nature of the job before deciding the
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age
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of any
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retirement age
  • life expectancy
  • economic necessity
  • financial insecurity
  • aging population
  • workforce diversity
  • knowledge transfer
  • cognitive benefits
  • age discrimination
  • physical capability
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