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In some countries, people are spending long hours at the workplace. Why does this happen? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In some countries nowadays, more and more people spend longer points at
work
. There are some reasons for
this
 change and I think
that is
 a positive progress.
To begin
 with, many people nowadays, especially young people tend to
work
 harder and longer for higher salary and more working experience. The more
time
 people spend in their workplace, the more job they can finish leading to higher salary to meet the demand in their activity.
Furthermore
, many young people choose a hard working life to improve their knowledge and working experience so that they can
work
 more professional and improve their productivity. Young people
also
 want to show to their employer that they have passion and responsibility for the job and company so that they should be given some promotion prospects.
Lastly
, many famous businessmen spends long
time
 at
work
 because simply like it. Due to those reasons above, I think that people spending more
time
 at industry are a positive advancement. It is true that, countries with long average working
time
 are more economically successful than those countries not having a long working
time
 because there is a direct link between hours and the outcome.
For example
, the magic improvement of Japan in the 20th century and now is the result of a hard working society where working
time
 can be up to 20 hours a day.
On the other hand
, many people love working because a hard working life gives them a sense of fulfilment or feeling that they are important. All in all, the biggest reason why people choose to spend long hours at
work
 just the improvement of their own heart and the society. Due to that, I believe
this
 is a positive evolution in
this
 modern world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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