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Writing Samples
Band 5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear
Mr.
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 Josh, I am pinky Vivek, living at 106 B2 Hill Park Avenue Street. with my family including
mother
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my mother
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, father and two brothers. We moved into the apartment
last
 month and paid extra money for the furniture.
However
, we have been having
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problem
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 with the furniture
provide
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. Recently we noticed that the bed is broken on one side and it creates difficulty in sleeping, even make much noise when we change our position.
Therefore
, I am requesting you to replace the bed as soon as possible, because we are new here and we do not know the people who
fixing
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 that issue, so, I am sending you the full detail along with the bed pictures or you can come and check the furniture if you want. Let me know if you are required any
further
 information please feel free to call me on
this
 number 0423377 or you can contact me at my email address ([email protected]). Please view the attached details and snaps. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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