You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Smith, I am writing to inform you of my inability to continue with my ongoing part-time evening course in Digital Marketing under your guidance. As you are aware, I am currently working as a Marketing Manager with a reputed FMCG company and recently got promoted as Senior Marketing Manager. As a consequence, there is a drastic increase in my job responsibilities and workload. Because of

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, I have to spend more time on my work and less on my studies. In

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week, I have missed my classes on four occasions because of which I received a show-cause notice from your side. Since we are on the verge of concluding the

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semester, I will request your permission for completing

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semester and,

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, allowing me to attend the remaining semesters on later dates.

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will help me successfully manage my job requirements without compromising on my studies. I will be grateful if you can honour my request. Yours sincerely, Ashish Sharma

AshishMon Aug 03 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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