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online shopping seems to be replacing the traditional method of buying. however some buyers are sceptical to this practice. discuss both benefits and risks associated with online shopping

#method #buyers #practice #risks
For those who are interested it is possible to surf the Internet and read articles discussing online shopping. There are several points of view on
this
 matter. The first claim
that
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 soon online shopping will change ordinary methods of buying. An alternative belief regards
this
is
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 harmful and considers a
lot
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 customers against to
this
 practice as the most important in that case essay both points of view are going to be examined and a particular opinion will be provided. On the one hand, a number of researchers are showing that in recent years there have been some changes in purchasing patterns.
As a result
, one trend is becoming more and more common. It does not matter whether one
like
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 it or not, the act has to be recognized online shopping has a plethora of advantages. The overwhelming majority of people consider that it is more convenient and
save
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 time.
Thus
, nobody can deny that it is really difficult to get rid of
this
 entirely or even avoid it.
However
,
this
 attitude may cause a certain degree of concern among experts who believe that online purchasing is a negative trend and numerous people are sceptical
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this
 practice. Of crucial importance is how to define the matter in question. It is often said that ordinary people become more lazy.
Nevertheless
, it is necessary to take into account all the circumstances of each individual case. From my point of view, the former opinion makes sense definitely, as it follows from my own experience.
Overall
, it should not be forgotten that an attitude to
this
 issue always depends on a particular person’s lifestyle and his or her personal background.
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Task Achievement
Ensure that all parts of the essay directly address the task prompt about discussing both benefits and risks of online shopping. Develop each viewpoint with specific examples to support the arguments.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled convenience
  • vast selection
  • digital platforms
  • comparison shopping
  • impulsive buying
  • aggressive marketing tactics
  • risk of fraud
  • counterfeit goods
  • compromised personal data
  • immediate satisfaction
  • physical examination
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