"The best things in life are free" To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

There are various expressions as well as opinions in the world related to
happiness
and
money
. While idealists often assert that the best things in
life
, like
happiness
and
health
, are free, those who take a more realistic stance disagree.
This
essay will take a more realistic look at
this
argument and contend that the best parts of
life
often come at a
cost
. It is generally agreed that
health
is our most important asset;
however
, while
health
itself
the thing named or in question
it
can be considered free,
this
is not always the case with maintaining good
health
. To keep in good shape, we often have to pay;
for example
, for gym memberships or wellness courses for meditation or yoga. We have to eat healthy food which usually costs more than processed or junk food. To reduce stress, people normally have to take holidays and these
too
Suggestion
cost money too
cost
money
.
Thus
,
one
of the best things in
life
- good
health
– doesn’t come for free. Some would
also
argue that
happiness
is the most important value in
life
,
although
, contrary to popular belief,
this
too comes at a
cost
. It is commonly said that experiences (as opposed to materials "things") make us happy. While
this
may be true, experiences often come at a
cost
. Consider a relaxing holiday away, or learning to become a pilot - these are experiences which would arguably make someone happier if they were to pursue them, yet they
cost
money
.
Thus
,
happiness
is not always free and the experiences which make us happy are not either. A final point regarding putting a price on
happiness
is an economic
one
. If the points in the previous paragraph are taken as true,
then
looking after our
health
and pursuing experiences that make us happy can be seen as opportunity costs.
This
means that whenever we are pursuing these experiences or going to the gym or on a meditation retreat, we are not working and,
thus
, losing
money
which we would
otherwise
have been
earning
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earned
. Because higher earnings on a large scale, in the form of GDP, are
one
measure of
wellbeing
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well being
, or
happiness
,
one
could argue that not earning
money
(
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
being
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Being
on holiday) at a given time can actually decrease our
happiness
, broadly speaking! To conclude,
one
can clearly see from the arguments presented above
that the
Accept comma addition
that, the
best things in
life
,
such
as
health
and
happiness
, are not always free. That said, it does not mean that free things
such
as jogging or relationships cannot make us happier or healthier. Perhaps a more realistic perspective on the costs (or lack thereof) of the best aspects of
life
is what is needed.
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