"The best things in life are free" To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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There are various expressions as well as opinions in the world related to
happiness
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and
money
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. While idealists often assert that the best things in
life
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, like
happiness
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and
health
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, are free, those who take a more realistic stance disagree.
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essay will take a more realistic look at
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argument and contend that the best parts of
life
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often come at a
cost
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. It is generally agreed that
health
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is our most important asset;
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, while
health
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itself
the thing named or in question
it
can be considered free,
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is not always the case with maintaining good
health
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. To keep in good shape, we often have to pay;
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, for gym memberships or wellness courses for meditation or yoga. We have to eat healthy food which usually costs more than processed or junk food. To reduce stress, people normally have to take holidays and these
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cost money too
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money
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.
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,
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of the best things in
life
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- good
health
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– doesn’t come for free. Some would
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argue that
happiness
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is the most important value in
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,
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, contrary to popular belief,
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too comes at a
cost
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. It is commonly said that experiences (as opposed to materials "things") make us happy. While
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may be true, experiences often come at a
cost
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. Consider a relaxing holiday away, or learning to become a pilot - these are experiences which would arguably make someone happier if they were to pursue them, yet they
cost
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money
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.
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,
happiness
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is not always free and the experiences which make us happy are not either. A final point regarding putting a price on
happiness
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is an economic
one
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. If the points in the previous paragraph are taken as true,
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looking after our
health
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and pursuing experiences that make us happy can be seen as opportunity costs.
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means that whenever we are pursuing these experiences or going to the gym or on a meditation retreat, we are not working and,
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, losing
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which we would
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have been
earning
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earned
. Because higher earnings on a large scale, in the form of GDP, are
one
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measure of
wellbeing
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well being
, or
happiness
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,
one
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could argue that not earning
money
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(
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
being
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Being
on holiday) at a given time can actually decrease our
happiness
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, broadly speaking! To conclude,
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can clearly see from the arguments presented above
that the
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that, the
best things in
life
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,
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as
health
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and
happiness
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, are not always free. That said, it does not mean that free things
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as jogging or relationships cannot make us happier or healthier. Perhaps a more realistic perspective on the costs (or lack thereof) of the best aspects of
life
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is what is needed.
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