The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The
food
we consume has has been evolving due to the improvement scientifically and also
technologically. This
change in the advancement has been regarded as two popular opinions such
as harmful and proficient. In this
essay, we are going to discuss our views on these opinions.
Food
consumption is one of the major portion of human life. Similarly
, the availability and production of food
should be sufficient and growing enough to satisfy everyone. In order to do that, we need technological support to help in the process of supplying food
to all people in the world. For example
: In the past, the population is less and the natural food
availability is considerably more. But when the population is more they cannot just rely on natural foods. Hence
, the invention of wheat processing machines and factories provided enough food
from natural wheat in the form of bread, tortillas etc. Therefore we
need technological support to fulfil these needs.
Accept comma addition
Therefore, we
However
, we are processing the foods a little more than required in the name of advancement. For this
reason, we have lost most of the nutrients from the food
we are supposed to get. Also
, we are eating by portions of nutrients rather than enjoying as part of food
. Suggestion
the food
For example
: Nowadays, all the food
is categorized under nutrient consumption like protein food
, carbs foods instead
of organic food
. We are losing other flavours and nutrients when we are consuming a particular type of food
under categorization. It should be accepted that we went too far, in the process we lost natural flavours.
In conclusion, even though technological advancement is necessary for the future of mankind, we should know the limit of its usage on processing of food
and balance the nutrients and production.Submitted by donbon1977 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!