Recent research has confirmed that “human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life". Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

Decling
Suggestion
Decking
Declaring
Decoupling
the number of animals are the part of natural process
this
has been happening
since
Suggestion
for
millions of years. There are mainly two reasons why
this
occurs
.
Accept space
.
Firstly
, illegal hunting and poaching. These animals,
then
, are used to prepare some
trational
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
medicines and
fashation
the state of being intensely interested (as by awe or terror)
fascination
industries. Some people hunt animals for fun just like any other sports and consider
this
as
there
of them or themselves
their
status
que
In so far as; in the capacity or character of; as
qua
. Apart from
this
, natural disasters,
for instance
, wild fire and
deforestion
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
wipe out
millons
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
millions
of creatures from the face of our earth.
Therefore
, people need to avoid using
such
products can protect these animals from extinction.
Similarly
, professionally
supervisioned
management by overseeing the performance or operation of a person or group
supervision
breeding programmes can be established to breed endangered species.
Additionally
, stricter punishments, law enforcement, security measures may control illegal hunters and poachers. School - going
childern
a young person of either sex
children
should be taught the significance of protecting wild animals and how the
endangerous
pose a threat to; present a danger to
endangers
animals could break the equilibrium of the eco- system. Everyone needs
understand
Suggestion
to understand
every species has right as human does. As a superior animal, human, have the responsibility to protect other animals too not only for those
spicies but
Accept comma addition
species, but
species but
spices but
spikes but
also
it is highly necessary for us as well.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • biodiversity
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • overexploitation
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable agriculture
  • forestry
  • pollution controls
  • waste management
  • conservation efforts
  • protected areas
  • environmental contamination
  • sustainable lifestyles
  • policy changes
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