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Some people believe that damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement of living standards. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, because of the improvement of technologies. Our living standards
is being
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are being
 more in a technological ways. More people using the resources which get harmful to our environment. The most serious
promblems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 that we all notice
that is
 the climate change.
This
 essay will talk about some reasons to support the issue. Glacier melting will be one
at
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of
 the damage to our
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. In recent years, because of the climate change. The
teametures
the length of a straight line passing through the center of a circle and connecting two points on the circumference
diameters
 of the world
is getting
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are getting
 higher and keep increasing everyday which made the glacier melting. So that the sea
lines
large gregarious predatory feline of Africa and India having a tawny coat with a shaggy mane in the male
lions
 were getting higher than before. The serious issue may be in the future, some of the cities like Venice will be
recover
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recovered
by
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from
water
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the water
 soon.
Energy
 will
also
 be the others problems. As we all, nowadays most
energy
 that we are using are limited which called natural
energy
 sources. If people keep using those
energy
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energies
 in a wasted way, one day it will be
use
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used
 cymbal.
Moreover
, many situations cannot use anymore like cars or others
tenchnology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
 devices. Overall,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement of living standards. Harmful to the environment is actually true. The rising of sea lines, the
discrease
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
dispose
 of limited
energy
 have been
caused
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causing
 a lot of damage
that
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that's
 all we know. If some situations happened, we cannot go back again.
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