Your colleague loaned you a book to use in a presentation at work. Write to your friend to say What the presentation was about Why it was important How the book helped you

Dear Mike, I am writing to express my gratitude for the book “Remote sensing of the environment” that I borrowed from you

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week. As you know, I was giving a presentation for one of the most revenue customers on Monday, who wants to make a 200 grand’s deal. Frankly speaking, my manager told me “Don’t screw it up” and I did not, thanks to you.

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, the main purpose of the meeting was to demonstrate the most effective methods of damage assessment in case of oil splits, and the book was significantly helpful. I have found a chapter fully dedicated to the issue of oil spills and their affection on marine life and how to prevent it. As well as

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, there was a detailed description with practical guidance, which software can be used for processing satellite data in order to assess the actual damage.

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again, I really appreciated your timely assistance with

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great book. Best regards, АMaria

mariya.vlassovaTue Aug 04 2020

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