You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

#visit #city #relatives #lives #town #home #offer

Dear Sim, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. With uncle bob, life must be adventurous and happy. As my mother already gave you the good news of me being promoted as the chief manager of

A&B

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the A&B

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news channel in

Delhi

. Well, guess what I am shifting to

Delhi

permanently. Since I have already made my future staying plans by renting an apartment in South

Delhi

, so I am all ready to start the new chapter of my life. But, the apartment I rented is still under some renovation so if you guys do not mind,

then

I would like to share a room at your house for about 3 weeks. I am leaving for

Delhi

day

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the day

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after tomorrow. I would not have to be there, it is just my mother and you know her, that she wants me to stay safe and sound and have no issues in settling down for the initial period. She insisted me a lot to ask

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apply

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and even I will pay for the duration of my stay. I do not want to be a burden

for

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you guys. Hope that you guys will welcome me and I will be waiting for your reply. Yours lovingly, Riya

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

205 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
warm welcome

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