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More and more people are becoming serious overweight. Some people think that a solution can be to increase the price of fattening food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The Argument between rise the cost of heavy snack is the solution or not has been never ended.Now a days large number of human beings facing obesity problems.Some individuals feel that increasing the price of fattening meal is the solution, but in my opinion, it would not solve the problem overnight.It may work in some scenarios.There are other ways which probably help to overcome
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increase the price of the fat feed would not solve the problem because people who are addicted to
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if the prices of pizza increase in the restaurant
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people still find
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he is taking healthy cuisine it does not mean that he is healthy.The people have to do regular exercises and spend at least one hour outdoor sports
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which helps to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
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increasing the price on fattening cooking little percentage helps.If the individual adopted to a healthier lifestyle, it does not think about these overweight issues.The government has to provide sporting facilities and build parks, so that the people use those sports facilities which will lead to healthy atmosphere. In conclusion
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increasing the prices of potent bread would not solve the overweight problems.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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