Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays
people
are concerned
about
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the
government
was
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is
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wasting
money
on
arts
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the arts
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and they
are thinking
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think
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that
this
money
should have
invested
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in
peoples'
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welfare. In my opinion, I completely agree with the above statement that the
government
is wasting
money
on paintings and
music
.
However
, at the same time, others think that
government
will allocate funds to the
arts
.
This
essay will discuss how the
government
is wasting
money
on the
arts
.
Firstly
, it is likely most of the citizens feel that the
government
spending too much
of
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money
on cultural activities,
such
as paintings,
music
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and music
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but the
government
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primary job is to provide common services,
such
as food, houses, transport,
sport
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sports
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facilities, parks,
community
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and community
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halls.
For example
,
in
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some countries
they
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apply
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are not economically better still they are spending huge
amount
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amounts
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of
money
on conducting
an
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apply
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international
event
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events
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like the football
world cup
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World Cup
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and hosting Olympic events etc.
This
type of unnecessary spending will impact the countries' economic growth. So
that is
the reason,
people
thinking
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think
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that the
government
wasting public resources.
On the other hand
, some
people
advised that spending
money
on the
arts
,
such
as painting and
music
will give individuals to show their talent on a global platform. Which eventually
increase
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increases
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country's
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the country's
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popularity
on
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world wide
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worldwide
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.
In addition
, the country got recognition all over the world. And
people
also
not
getting
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get
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bored doing the same kind of work every day. If the
government
train
people
on
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the
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painting and
conducting
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conducts
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free
music
classes, the
people
will come to
this class
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these classes
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will learn the art of
music
. So
that is
the reason, some
people
disagree with
that
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the
government
wasting
money
on cultural activities. In conclusion, it is likely most
people
agree that the
government
spending huge
money
on cultural events. In my opinion, I completely agree with the
government
wasting
money
on the
arts
. Still, some
people
believe that the
government
giving inspiration to the
people
to learn the
arts
.
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