There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Manager, I would like to let you know,
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couple
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of weeks, the
bus
services are not properly running in a rout 34. Even, everything was fine till new construction started in the area, most of the time buses are delayed and
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the regular commuters. Let me explain the problem, due to new railway line construction,
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frequencies have been reduced, especially 8:30 AM schedule
bus
; Even though evening hours buses are
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. Unfortunately, I am not able to reach
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on time
,
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and
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other passengers face the same problem. Could you please restart
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timing
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? Even, I would be happy if the service will start 10 to 15 minutes early or later, but not after 9:00 AM. If you needed some special recommendation from area supervisor, I am happy to approach him, but make the request in fast mode. Thank you very much for considering. Your Faithfully, Vinod Rajput
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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