There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Manager,
I would like to let you know,
since
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for
couple
of weeks, the Change the article
a couple
bus
services are not properly running in a rout 34. Even, everything was fine till new construction started in the area, most of the time buses are delayed and effecting
the regular commuters.
Let me explain the problem, due to new railway line construction, Correct your spelling
affecting
bus
frequencies have been reduced, especially 8:30 AM schedule bus
; Even though evening hours buses are also
. Unfortunately, I am not able to reach office
on timeCorrect article usage
the office
,
and Remove the comma
apply
Correct your spelling
maybe
may be
other passengers face the same problem.
Could you please restart Correct your spelling
maybe
morning
timing Correct article usage
the morning
bus
? Even, I would be happy if the service will start 10 to 15 minutes early or later, but not after 9:00 AM. If you needed some special recommendation from area supervisor, I am happy to approach him, but make the request in fast mode.
Thank you very much for considering.
Your Faithfully,
Vinod RajputSubmitted by vinodsinghrajput on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite