Some people feel that it is wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Others feel that there are benefits for the animals and for the humans. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your personal view.

There is no doubt that zoos attract thousands of visitors every day. While advocates of these establishments think that there are some benefits of

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, others

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point out

that

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can bring severe problems.

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and explain my support for the latter view. On the one side of the thought, there are some people

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considered

that the keeping of animals in a cage has benefits to both the society and the creatures.

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is because people often get an opportunity to see the zoo inmates in a close proximity, which allows them to learn more about them.

For instance

, many students and researchers study about the behaviours and way of living of these living organisms.

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, visiting them

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their natural environment, the wild

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since

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cannot be affordable for the common man.

In addition

to

this

, they can have a safe

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life, hence

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they are away from their predators.

Nevertheless

, opponents of the above mentioned view consider that the captivation causes certain psychological and physical diseases and disorders to the caged ones. To illustrate

this

, some studies have suggested that they would experience loneliness, eventually, end

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up

with depressive disorders. The reason is that most of these animals were born as a social one. When they captured and confined in the zoo,

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would prevent them to enjoy the life which supposed to have them. Sometimes, they may be physically abused by

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of them or themselves

their

care takers in the park as well.

Therefore

, I

am totally against of

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am totally against

the aim of these

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institutions

in the name of animal protection. In conclusion,

although

it is sometimes thought that the organisms and the public are benefitted, if the animals are in the cage, but in my

opinion, I,

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opinion, I

completely oppose the statement since

this

has some severe consequences.