Some people feel that it is wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Others feel that there are benefits for the animals and for the humans. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your personal view.
There is no doubt that zoos attract thousands of visitors every day. While advocates of these establishments think that there are some benefits of
this
, others point out that this
can bring severe problems. This
essay will discuss the both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.
On the one side of the thought, some people consider that the keeping of animals in a cage has benefits to both the society and the creatures.This
is because people get an opportunities
to see the zoo inmates in a close proximity, which allow them to learn more about them. Suggestion
opportunity
For instance
, many students and researchers study about the behaviours and way of living of these living organisms. In contrast
, visiting them on
their natural environment, the wild Suggestion
in
safaries
, are only possible for an overland journey by hunters (especially in Africa)
safaris
richers
since writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)
writers
researchers
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this
cannot be affordable for the common man.
Nevertheless
, opponent of the above mentioned view consider
that the captivation causes certain psychological and physical diseases and disorders to the caged ones. To illustrate Suggestion
considers
this
, some studies have suggested that they would experience loneliness, eventually, end up with depressive disorders. The reason is that most of these animals were born as a social one. When they captured and confined in the zoo, this
would prevent them to enjoy the life which supposed to have them. Therefore
, I am totally against of
the aim of these institutions in the name of animal protection.
In conclusion, Suggestion
am totally against
although
it is sometimes thought that the organisms and the public are benefitted, if the animals are in the cage, but in my opinion, I completely oppose the statement since this
has some severe consequences.Submitted by Sal on
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