With the widespread use of the Internet, more people choose to work or study from home. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

With the arrival of the world wide web more and more people
are preferring
Suggestion
prefer
to work or study from home.
Although
technology has made our lives easier, faster and comfortable, we cannot overlook the demerits of relying too much on these.I do not believe that using
internet
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the internet
has more advantages than disadvantages.
Firstly
, with the advent of technology, work has be
come more
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easier
more easier
easir
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • flexible schedule
  • commuting
  • carbon emissions
  • productivity
  • distractions
  • isolation
  • collaboration
  • remote communication
  • overworking
  • burnout
  • self-discipline
  • self-motivation
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