Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree with the view?

Nowadays,

arts

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the arts

are gaining popularity in many countries because of the increasing investments of the

Government

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. Some people are of the opinion that

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investment is ineffective and can be spent in other core sectors for betterment of the society.

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, it is the responsibility of the

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to ensure the use of

arts

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the arts

to a certain

degree especially in the

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degree, especially in the

core sectors

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as healthcare and tourism for economic growth and development of the society.

Arts

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The arts

play a prominent in boosting the economy of many countries. Many tourists travel to explore new places, understand history, and culture of different countries.

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, local communities are benefited by

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tourists. The tourism enhances the business activities in many parts of the countries, resulting in employment. The local artist

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as dances, singers, and musicians work round the clock to entertain thousands of foreign spectators, earning huge amount of money for their livelihood.

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is only possible if the

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invest

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invests

in preserving the historical places, attracting more tourist across the globe.

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, the collaborative application of arts and healthcare have benefited in many ways to not only analyses but

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cure many mental diseases. The collaborative application of arts and medical science have helped to examine some of

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the medical issues

in humans. Many studies have proven that using different forms of arts

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as painting, and dances can be

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an effective therapy

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for

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many mental diseases. The painting therapy is used by many doctors to cure depression, especially in

age group

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the age group

of 18 to 25 years.

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boosted the recovery of

these patient

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these patients

by 50% rather than the normal traditional way.

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, the

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needs to allocate funds for

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initiatives. In conclusion, the arts contribute a considerable amount to generate employment and resolve critical

medicine

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medical

issues.

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, the

government

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needs to facilitate funding to arts sectors as it has

direct or indirect effect

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a direct or indirect effect

the direct or indirect effect

on the development of the society.