In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common that most countries use people with light criminal

offenses

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offence

to participate in public services.

Eventhough

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Even though

some believe that every convict should sentenced

for

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to

prison against their crimes, I would argue that it is essential to utilise them in

communical

concerned with promoting unity among churches or religions

ecumenical

canonical

activites

any specific behavior

activities

for a greater benefit.

Firstly

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, sentencing all offenders into an imprisonment will make them anxious and stress.

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is because it allows them to interact

and socialise with with

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and socialise with

other prisoner whom charged with serious crimes

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as organized crimes and murder will impose a certain negativity on mentality.

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, an athlete whom involved with

minor case

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a minor case

minor cases

of

drug

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the drug

may ultimately end up developing connections with convicts and might later

absorbed

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absorb

into crime rings.

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, if

such

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lighter charged individual used in social

activites

any specific behavior

activities

instead

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, it will be more beneficial for the society and

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will improve their mind positively avoid involving in

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bad activities

further

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.

On the other hand

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,

instead

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developing correction facilities the related

funding which

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funding, which

could be used in public welfare

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as health care, education and social security as it is expensive to maintain correction facilities for every offender out of

government’s money

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the government’s money

. As a consequence, more taxpayer money will be needed in order to servicing and expanding prisons.

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, if increase the use felons of lighter crimes in welfare activities, it will be

benficial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

for the national economy by saving expenses as well by having free labour throughout to use in public

benenfit

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

. In conclusion,

eventhough

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even though

some

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that prison is the ultimate destiny for any breach of

low

the collection of rules imposed by authority

law

and order, it is my firm

belifef

any cognitive content held as true

belief

that utilising offenders in social and communal activities will develop their attitudes and will

beneficial

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benefit

to the economy in many ways.