You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you didn't attend Say what you will do to make up for it.

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Dear Mrs Zuhra Abdukarimova I am writing to apologize for not being able to participate in the process of explaining a new theme yesterday. I am terribly sorry for missing the most necessary and important lecture. I really wanted to attend the class. But unfortunately, I couldn’t participate in the class for some

reasons

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. The reason I couldn’t attend the class was that we had to go to the hospital because we had all family

illness

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. I couldn’t have left my sick children alone If we had left at the hospital early. Because I had to take care of them. I knew that

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theme was very important to me and that’s why I have asked one of my wonderful

friend

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Malika to record a new theme and explain it to me In the evening if possible. I hope you can understand my situation and I would like you to know one more thing I will justify your confidence by getting a high score in the exam. Your

sencerely

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sincerely

Gavhar

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Gather

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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The youth crime rate is rising rapidly in many countries. What is the reason for this trend? What can parents and teachers do to solve it?

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