Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organisations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Scientific
research
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is considered to be confidential part of the
country
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. In order to maintain the security and safety in the
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country it
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country, it
should be mandatory that
government
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must take care of its funding
instead
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of private of sectors. Only the
government
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must have
control
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on
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of
the
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area. I will give you the
example
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in the following paragraph to elaborate the reasons of being limited to the
government
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sector only.
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with, Reasearch
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
of every
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are
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is
confidentials
entrusted with private information and the confidence of another
confidential
in case of safety and security. No one
disclose
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discloses
has disclosed
their plans and
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until they get successful in their respective work.
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hand if
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hand, if
country
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give
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gives
their
control
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to private
people
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people, then
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there would be no confidentiality maintained from anyone.
whether
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Whether
it can be medical
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or nuclear
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. IF we take
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of
current situation
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the current situation
of Covid-19, if anyone got the permission for
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research medicine
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research, medicine
for the same
then
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it can harm anyone for their personal grudges.
if
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If
we take
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example
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the example
of nuclear
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, the private company can destroy the whole world if the
government
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do not take
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does not take
control
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of all these things. To continue with, on the other side if the
control
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would be given to the private sectors
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it may lead towards terrorism.
For
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example if
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example, if
the
government
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gives permission to the private sectors for testing in the nuclear plant and
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to show, make visible or apparent
displays
every part of it
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it may
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lead
to destroy the whole world. So
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I
am not at all agree
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don't at all agree
am not at all agree
with the permission of giving access to the private sectors. To conclude with, in order to maintain the peace and safety in the
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,
then
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all the scientific
research
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must be taken care by the
government
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instead
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of private sectors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equitable access
  • public good
  • prioritize
  • environmental conservation
  • public health
  • bureaucratic inefficiencies
  • stifle innovation
  • profit motives
  • enhance efficiency
  • rapid advancements
  • combined approach
  • stable funding
  • ethical standards
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