Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organisations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific
research
is considered to be confidential part of the
country
. In order to maintain the security and safety in the
country it
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country, it
should be mandatory that
government
must take care of its funding
instead
of private of sectors. Only the
government
must have
control
on
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of
the
research
area. I will give you the
example
in the following paragraph to elaborate the reasons of being limited to the
government
sector only.
To begin
with, Reasearch
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
of every
country
are
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is
confidentials
entrusted with private information and the confidence of another
confidential
in case of safety and security. No one
disclose
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discloses
has disclosed
their plans and
research
until they get successful in their respective work.
On the other
hand if
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hand, if
country
give
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gives
their
control
to private
people
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people, then
then
there would be no confidentiality maintained from anyone.
whether
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Whether
it can be medical
research
or nuclear
research
. IF we take
example
of
current situation
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the current situation
of Covid-19, if anyone got the permission for
research medicine
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research, medicine
for the same
then
it can harm anyone for their personal grudges.
if
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If
we take
example
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the example
of nuclear
research
, the private company can destroy the whole world if the
government
do not take
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does not take
control
of all these things. To continue with, on the other side if the
control
would be given to the private sectors
then
it may lead towards terrorism.
For
example if
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example, if
the
government
gives permission to the private sectors for testing in the nuclear plant and
diclose
to show, make visible or apparent
displays
every part of it
then
it may
leads
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lead
to destroy the whole world. So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am not at all agree
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don't at all agree
am not at all agree
with the permission of giving access to the private sectors. To conclude with, in order to maintain the peace and safety in the
country
,
then
all the scientific
research
must be taken care by the
government
instead
of private sectors.
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